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Where's Momma?-redo by ~monkey-muffin:iconmonkey-muffin:



Counting to ten,
a little girl giggles,
looking around,
the little girl wiggles.

She peers behind the couch,
no not there,
she looks inside the closet,
she can't find her anywhere!

She laughs and runs,
"I'm going to find you!"
she sneaks into the room,
past the picture she drew.

Her smile fades,
and she sits on the bed.
She starts to cry,
with her hands on her head.

Someone comes behind her,
so soft and gingerly,
unsuspecting,
the little girl giggled with glee.

Tickling her,
till she started to choke,
her mother lifted her up,
and she gave her a poke.

"I found you,"
the little girl excitedly said.
"No, I found you.
Now it's time for bed."
©2006-2009 ~monkey-muffin
:iconmonkey-muffin:

Author's Comments

Well, I read the poem to my mom, and she said, "I like the beginning, but why couldn't the mom just pop out of a closet? Why does everything have to be about death?" So I re-did it.

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:iconopdycke:
I like this one too! I think i'm going to fav them both.
:iconxphile569:
i like the death one better...
but thats just me being morbid :D

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-I've got a stomachful of Xanax. I took what was left of a bottle. It might have been too much... This isn't a real suicide-thing. This is probably one of those cry-for-help things.-
:iconmonkey-muffin:
Thanks much for the fav's

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Nike, just do it...

"Your destiny is never told, so live life your way."
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:iconmonkey-muffin:
Well, I prefer the death ones also because they are more fun to right ^^ *giggle* but my mom got mad at me for being so....well, deathy.(love my word? =P)

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Nike, just do it...

"Your destiny is never told, so live life your way."
*click* [link]
:iconxphile569:
great word
add it to the urban dictionary

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-I've got a stomachful of Xanax. I took what was left of a bottle. It might have been too much... This isn't a real suicide-thing. This is probably one of those cry-for-help things.-
:iconhomicidalhampster:
i like both :D

great job bekka!!

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I'm not dumb. I just have a command of thoroughly useless information.
:iconmonkey-muffin:
Like I would hesitate to!=P

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Nike, just do it...

"Your destiny is never told, so live life your way."
*click* [link]
:iconmonkey-muffin:
Thanks kindly.

--
Nike, just do it...

"Your destiny is never told, so live life your way."
*click* [link]

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